“She didn't do lovers”

In our first discussion on conflict in romance novels we learned several valuable lessons, such as internal conflict is different from external conflict, developing emotional journeys takes precedence over developing plot and themes, writing for Mills & Boon doesn't have to be easy, and unexpected pregnancy can sometimes become a situation where feelings arise. Secrets Uncovered didn't stop there, however, and Chapter Two of the e-book continues, dealing with black moments, the pitfalls of plotting, the necessity of grovelling, creating intensity while avoiding threatening the reader and the dangers a romance author faces when tempted to write properly. Before all that, though, we should assume you, gentle reader, remain hopelessly incompetent, and so here are a few of the most obvious mistakes you have probably already made.

The best place to start would be with your opening, the setting of the scene, the introduction of your heroine and hero. There are so many archetypal beginnings to avoid Romance HQ lists them, before explaining that sometimes an obvious first sequence can be rescued with subversion and the correct amount of emotional honesty. Therefore, if your heroine has recently been dumped, found her boyfriend with another woman, or been caught in an embarrassing position in front of her family, or entire office, do not fret, because even though this is lazy writing and too familiar to catch the reader's attention it might be strong enough if your carefully-tailored characters add depth to the potentially superficial incident. 'Acting out of character for the sake of the plot is a no-no. If your characters start bending every which way just to reach your desired conclusion then you are writing puppets, not people.' A romantic heroine is rarely imbued with a credible sense of dignity, but if they are true to themselves the reader will understand why they are single and unhappy, and what kind of belief system they must destroy within themselves in order to enjoy their happily-ever-after.

Every writer receives and then immediately ignores an oft-repeated phrase of advice, show don't tell. Heavy exposition kills the pacing of the narrative and hurts the mood of the prose. The characters and plot should be revealed through actions and responses. This is a common mistake in many Mills & Boon novels, so Secrets Uncovered sees fit to point out the problems caused by bombastic explanation. 'Events that should be front stage are anything that moves on the romance or creates conflict and has its basis in emotion. Anything else is window dressing.' Yet hang on, what about back-story? In Chapter One we were told to write extensive biographies and justify every decision, flaw and misgiving with previous failed relationships and father abandonment issues. Why do that if we can't use it in a lengthy speech to eat up a few hundred words? 'Ah hah! I hear you say – what about back story? The thing is, the most powerful back story is the one the reader sees through your characters’ reactions.' Despite this, your heroine will eventually have the opportunity to reveal all about their father, or that time they were left at the altar by a handsome con-artist, in case their tendencies implied through reactions make them appear insanely paranoid.

Moving on, how do we avoid the usual trappings most published Mills & Boon writers fall into on their way to success and riches?

• 'Choose your set-up carefully'

Do not simply jump in with any old idea, write the first fifty-five thousand words that come to mind and then mail off your manuscript and hope for the best. This tactic is only suitable for authors who have a built-in fanbase and scores of books already on their shelves. For your debut novel it is worth spending time planning the details of your story, and working from a theme, with powerful, unique, grounded and believable characters in a tale familiar enough to attract an audience yet unfamiliar enough to strike for originality. Once you have these fixtures in place any fifty-five thousand words will suffice.

• 'Make sure your characters are driving the plot'

Often romance novels throw their hero and heroine together through unlikely contrivance and push the inevitability of the story to the forefront, leaving the characters powerless to affect change on their lives, locked in as they are to accepting their fates are intertwined and they were born to be together. Fighting their desires, doubts and better natures would be senseless and only delaying what is written in the stars in permanent beams of light. Even though this style is consistent with the genre as a whole, apparently it is wrong.

• 'The reader is interested in reaction not action'

And you certainly wouldn't want to second-guess your reader. After all, the author has spent hours honing their characters and shaping a structure to challenge them, resulting in epiphanies that strengthen and enrich their lives, and sometimes related to that, helping them to find love. Once you have proven to the reader your heroine is a strong-willed, stubborn, feisty, shy, sexually-naïve tourist who coos at babies in supermarkets, and had her meet a conceited Brazilian billionaire who had just happened to have made a bet with his friend that he could buy any woman to have sex with him, what will really interest the reader is why this girl would completely go against all her personality traits and say, 'Sure.'

• 'Know what your plot needs to be on the page'

Your plot just doesn't belong anywhere else. The majority of authors know what their book must look like because Mills & Boon have told them. Deviating from plot points such as heroine meeting hero by the end of the first page and declaring their undying love on the last page would be suicidally ambitious. Once you have a solid beginning and a happy ending your job is largely complete, and as long as what happens inbetween these two moments doesn't inexplicably flash-back to Civil War-era Spain you should be successful. In writing that, though, Bewildered Heart cannot be sure what, 'Know what your plot needs to be on the page' actually means.

• 'Your reader will go with any plot if they believe in your characters'

For more on this turn back to the chapter on character we have yet to write about. As long as your principals are consistent in their decision-making yet consistently surprising in their decision-making the reader will read on, hoping these two love-birds get their respective acts together and realise that while he maybe a ruthless tycoon who hates all women she is unlike every other women because of a troubled relationship with her dad, and while she maybe gutsy, proud and desperately fighting to protect her animal sanctuary from closure the tycoon wanting to replace the animals with a shopping mall is caring, rich and strikingly dishy. Throw in an unexpected pregnancy and the reader will have to know how they deal with the news, much more curious about that than why the grizzly bear is suddenly acting so suspiciously.

• 'The characters are going on a journey – think of the plot as a road, not the destination'

Much like driving the destination is often where the journey ends, once the driving has concluded and the driver and their travelling companions have reached where they intended to go. In romance writing terms the analogy is apt. After all, we know where the journey is headed and will end once we get there, as hero kisses heroine, having apologised for the speeding, never indicating when changing lanes and refusing to wear a seatbelt in order to be closer to her. The drama is kept to the trip, how and why they are going, rather than where, and will they stop to eat lunch at a burger van parked in a lay-by? Imagine the greatest road trip you have ever under-taken, the one where you took several wrong turns and discovered an abandoned theme park when you had originally set off to buy a lampshade from a furniture shop. Now reinvent yourself as an emotionally-insecure, yet beautiful twenty-something, and your Sat Nav as a sophisticated, gorgeous, yet heartlessly arrogant billionaire, exchange petrol for sex and the car for life itself and you have yourselves one hell of a novel.